1. "Take advantage"
2. "can be opened" -- the "in context" here is not necessary
3. "With native access to the camera, it offers an optimized experience: take photos, add tags, annotate or comment on photos."
4. "It can even support" or "It even supports"
5. "Offer your mobile users the best photo app for Salesforce."

1. "Take advantage"
2. "Enhance the" "with the"
3. "Integrate images into Service Reports with optimized size and resolution."  

1. Put a bulleted list here: (For example) It would read more easily, but it might take up too much space on the page...I get that.
   UI Components:
       Album - image gallery for a record
       Search - display images from other records
       Single Image

Or: another example with space-saving:
UI Components:
Album - Search from other records  - Single Image (and just lose the verbiage)

2.  "Configure YOUR Salesforce to fit YOUR needs with a SharinPix Component"

1. 6 main use cases out of the many seen over the last four years
2. SharinPix supports many use cases.
3. Inspection, to validate steps of a process
4. Just to change it up: How about: "There's a SharinPix component to fit YOUR business needs."

1. "SharinPix Vision Applications facilitate creating, managing, reviewing and optimizing"
2. "SharinPix Image Experts help you envision and scope your.."
3. "SharinPix Labeling Services can create high quality Einstein Vision Models for you."

It looks like SharinPix Services and Labeling (with one L) are the same bullet point?

1. Licenses include
2. Offline support for

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