Be vigilant about bringing a cluttered look to your demo and your page in general. Clean, well-organized lines and images will serve you better than "gadget" images. The mix of circles with a kind of icon in each, not all of which are readable as icons (ex. offline support = airplane? maybe...), give way below to line drawings, which are more "readable," but which confuse the eye about with so much DIFFERENT stuff going on. Cleaner lines would be more informative in the end.

1. GET IT NOW shows a down arrow, which is not where Get it Now lives. This could be confusing.
2. More screenshots and examples looks like a link but doesn't work like a link.
3. A simple "Use the Get It Now Button to start your FREE TRIAL" would convey what you want to say here.

This slide shows -- left side: a list of features in the app, and right side: a list of use cases. Again, the "Check more examples and screens shots" seems like a link but isn't.

1. Related to...what?
2. -- from the field, or in the field, or  into the form fields, and send those values to Salesforce fields.
3. More Examples, etc. -- is this supposed to be a link? if so, it doesn't work.
4. Either for a SMART FIELD OPERATIONS IMPLEMENTATION or for SMART FIELD OPERATIONS IMPLEMENTATIONS.

This page is easier to read in some ways than your intro page. I see that you are aiming to make sure those who are reading this can find their use case somewhere in this slide show.  I wonder if having clickable links on Slide #2 to take visitors to their use case industry would make it easier to get right to what you can do for THEM.

Moves really fast. Note the typo in the line of text at the bottom. ("Edit &amp annotation")
This is supposed to be an overview of the NEW features. But visually, it is so different from the rest of the presentation that, again, I am concerned about your potential customers feeling overwhelmed or confused and leaving the page.

I caught a few other details that were misspelled, etc. but my overall impression was that you could lose a lot of the verbiage in the left column, because the slides are moving too fast to actually read them, and concentrate on SHOWING, which the demo does a pretty job of, what the Mobile app can do.

1. Little phone  + Salesforce Cloud is superfluous. There are two big phones on the screen.
2. "Sharin Pix Lightning Components work_ on the Salesforce mobile app and on all the other apps compatible with Lightning Components.
3. All our features
4. Question: Is it "roll" these days and not "camera roll?"
5. I don't understand "or access quickly to your camera in one click"
6. "How does it work"

1. "The SharinPix camera app can be launched from any Salesforce mobile Application"
2. "It offers an optimized experience taking photos, adding tags, annotation and comments. There is also a checklist of images as well as support for scanning documents with automatic edge detection."

I see how you are making a distinction between the Salesforce Mobile App and the FSL Mobile App. As long as this stays consistent, it will work for your page visitors.

Head this with a larger type: PROBLEM SOLVED!

1. The problem descriptions are too small and too light to be easy to read. (This page is 135%) Also this is not
2. Gigabytes are represented by GB rather than Go.
3. "Your pictures can load in the background, only notifying you if there is a problem-- allowing you to optimise time spent in the field. "
4. "Build Salesforce reports with fields that are automatically filled with a SharinPix image URL that links directly to mandatory pictures."
5. "...Verify that your image requirements are met."
6. ...to count images in Partent as a field"?
7. "hitting limits"
8. "Automating image resize and URL extraction prepares the images to be used with any Document Generation tool from the App Exchange or SharinPix's own PDF generation too. "
9. "Searching through pages of images can be a time-consuming task. With SharinPix, existing Salesforce reports with image tag selection lets the marketing team find exactly the images they need in a minute."

1. "Annotate"
2. British usage with companies: "SharinPix resize," as if we are saying "they." American usage: "SharinPix resizes", as if we are saying "it."
3. "...so it is possible to put hundreds of pictures on a single PDF without reaching limits."
4. "When" not Wehn... But I'm not sure what you mean to say here. Here's my best guess: "When you need to take different photos of the same object, for example, for an inspection, SharinPix Image Grid offers an easy way to upload already categorized images." -- the rest I'm not sure of what you're saying...
5. "When you categorize pictures on a Salesforce record page with tags, you can use the SharinPix Image sync to send a watermarked version of the images to your web page.

Maybe: Works Everywhere!
I think you have probably made this case already?

1. Header in BOLD: Too difficult to read. I get that SharinPix works just about everywhere in the world. It feels cluttered and too much like shouting to me.
2. The images here are showing me a big desktop, a couple of mobile phones and three small desktops that are not giving me much info.
3. There are no buttons below to click.
4. This link isn't working.

Here I would let the user know that we've moved to Use Cases?

I like this basic approach to showing what a specific part of the SharinPix family of services can provide. This provides a clear path, and shows me the different things that you can do. This can be repeated for other use cases...in this style. It seems quieter, but also cleaner.

1. This slide should be labeled like those on Retail Execution-- a clear demonstration of using SharinPix with Field Service Visits. I would put "Field Services" instead of the "How To" label.
2. Should be a reasonable SIZE, not weight, I think.

Again, lose the How To and just make clear that this is yet another wonderful use case for your SharinPix App.

1. This layout is confusing. Do we have two #2 steps here, like we did in the previous slide? If so, then we need to put a little purple 2 on this arrow.
2. There is too much information on this slide as well. In the previous slide, you took us to the Album on one of our #2 steps, and to the Quick action on the other #2 Step. But this is very difficult to figure out where my eye needs to go. #4 and #5 are at the top of the page, and really, they should be following on from #3, but the step after #3 doesn't have a number.
3. The List of "Optimized Camera Usage" makes the page cluttered.  I see the information there might be exactly what a prospective client is looking for in terms of features. But I doubt if you will get him/her to READ all the words on the page. There are too many and the eye doesn't know where to go.

This slide is an example of the inconsistency of the presentation here. Now there are almost no words on the page, while the previous slide had far too many. I like this kind of sparse presentation. The lines are clean and the comparison is clearly understandable. But it doesn't go with the majority of the rest of the presentation.

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